The Horror of Our Love (Jeff The Killer Love Story) Review by Adriana
- cookiemonster21801
- Sep 14, 2014
- 2 min read
This story was written about Jeff The Killer falling in love with the young girl Alana. This story was inspired by a song, as says the author.
I really liked that the story was written from two point of views, Jeff's and Alana's. It made e see how much Jeff felt and what his thoughts were compared to Alana's. Another good thing about this story is that it contains a lemon. I usually don't like lemons, but this one was so well put into the story, and the words so well picked, that it managed to create something that wasn't disgusting or grusome, but rather something i could actually read. Now I'm not saying i would show this to my 9 year old cousin, but as a 13 year old girl reading things on the internet, it really is a break from the disgusting lemons out there. I also like how she didn't just cut off the story with "You should know what happens next" or "The following content is not suited for the internet", she went with it and wrote the leon no matter how awkward it was. The begining of the story itself was interesting. It starts with Alana walking to school through an abandoned park. The author didn't give you all the information at once, she eased into it, starting with the action and moving towards the boring naes and ages. I don't even think she included how old Alana was, but that Alana goes to highschool, you could assume she is somewhere between 15 and 17, also bringing in the detail that she still lives at home and follows her mother's rule. I found this story to be amazing in my opinion. You can find the story on Quotev by searching 'The Horror of Our Love' or follow this link.
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